Comments : Misery

  • 12 years ago

    by Fulcrous

    This comment is for all your pieces.
    I don't understand why but I feel as if each and every one of your poems remind me of Breaking Benjamin's song "Dear Agony". Despite knowing the origins of the feelings of this poem, as displayed in your profile description, I really enjoy the touch of reality in feeling sadness because it comes from real experiences and through your work these feelings are evoked in the readers. A job well done.

    Finally a few words of real-life advice.
    The key to success is to be yourself. Don't let anyone stop you from living your dreams. Do what you do for a reason, stay true to yourself. If you ever need don't be afraid to call for help, but don't be surprised if it doesn't come because in this world you're not the only one. Keep pushing forward; don't let your talents run away.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I agree with NotAdvised; in this world you pretty much are alone, however that needs to make you stronger, show everyone how strong you are, that you can withstand any obstacle that is thrown your way. keep writing, it is a great stress reliever and lets you get your feelings off your chest. anyway, great poem. 5/5