Comments : Lovers Pain

  • 11 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This was such a lovely poem .. .. it really was :)) al i have left to say is stunning !!!!

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      :) thx.......you have made my day :0)

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I like the flows..the rhyme and the words you used in this poem..so lovely and awesome. Just keep writing..I know you have a great potential. God bless:))

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok so i've been sneakly reading your poems at work a little this afternoon and i have to say im diggin em :-)

    This one in particular, i love the flow and imagery of your pen here, also i really like your word choice too !!

    i love a good love poem and the feelings seem to ooooooooze out in this, seriously great job :-)

    EDIT: also i really like the shape most of your writes take they always seem interesting to me *shrugs*

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you!!! :)

      It just made my day not only the fact you like, and commented on my poem but other poems I have written caught your attention too, very kind of you.