Lol oh my gosh I love this because I love mary jane too, hahah this poem tickled me, You did a goodd job writing this poem i tired to write one for weed before too, wasnt as good as this one but nice poem good work :)

Well written and desribed 5/5

This is so detailed, well done friend :)

Oh goodness what a great poem. I myself have never partaken in this "sin" as you called it. :P
I like your words though makes it all the more tempting. :)

Oh mary jane<3 so descriptive, definitely know that feeling, lol. 5/5!

Moved to a new city and wishing for a touch of her kiss as-well.

Nice poem :) i'll nominate it, not that it'll probably go very far due to the nature of the write.

Ah, can't nominate, oh well :S

Haha, thank you:) mind checking out my latest poems as well?

I do miss mary jane, I wont lie.
But like a lot of good things. To much in abundance is a bad thing.
Mary jane is the queen of hook lining a soul into a spiral that's difficult to climb out of. With self control and moderation, not only is mary jane more enjoyable (as in you don't build a tolerance)
but the effects are ten fold better. Sad I probably wont ever do it again, my new wife is very innocent and probably will never consent. Oh well... its all good. I liked it too much anyway.

I really like this poem, when reading it made me think of a music video........something more line with what Lana Del Rey would do, great poem

Haha yess!! -bows down- this is whats up its like a rap almost i feel it fo sho haha