Dont give up. .

I really liked this poem though, it had raw emotion in it, like a plea.....its deep and powerful. and I totally get what you mean as well

Do not give up. :( You still have one a many years to experience.

I liked this poem but for me it seemed it just stopped. I felt it could have gone on more. :) But what you have is great as is as well.

I can really feel your feelings in here. And just know that sometimes, when life looks bleak, there is always hope. :) Nice poem!