Comments : Remember me

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Sounds like a secret admirer. Does her eyes
    see what you see? Does she think of of you while absent. Only one way to find out,
    go and ask 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awhhh this is so beautiful , im a sucker for love poems like this , with this pure love, i know the feeling as well, and it realy does sound like an admirer :) and yeshhh go ask...

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is such a beautiful poem. I really like the way you have described your feelings for this person. I love the fact that you see her the way you do and you think that everyone will see her the same way, no matter what she looks like or is. I think that just shows how much affection you have for her.

    Beautiful poem.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Yourgolden hair, like
    the sunrise, outshines the
    moon at night"
    ---I'm particularly fond of this part. Really like the simile here.
    And the ending was unexpected, for me. Nicely done