hey sarah, good poem! i cant exactly relate to the same feelings.. but i do understand them. in this poem you do a great job of showing how much you love your father and how much you truely care for him. i know he will never be the same again, but i know that things will get better for both of you. your father is a lucky man to have someone like you as his daughter. you truely are a wonderfull person.

~chris engle

that was a really good poem. thanks for commenting on mine and keep writing :D

that was a good poems i understand what ur going though my family went though the same stuff with me