Omg Im sooooooo in love with this piece, its perfectly written:)
Great job:)

Will the sun come back tomorrow
And if to , where will it shine
What path shall I take.
I like this piece from the start to the conclusion.. Kudos!

Who knows, but I do hope tht the sun will continue shining.

Life's path are unknown but it's really good if the sun lights them for us since it's tough to walk in the dark, we might as well just stay in one place if the sun doesn't come out.. or who knows. Nice piece.

This poem is so smooth and the language is so soft and strong. it sounds like poetry . are you sour you are not the Santa ?