Oki this is gr8 write i tell you
the start lines was fantastic and the more i went into the poem the more the image i had in my mind is more clear this is like a farewell poem
like saying goodbye to somebody
this inspired me into writing something new
btw this piece had a very epic ending and
very very powerful message
we really regret things when it is too late to regret them after they are already lost
gr8 write
5/5 keep writing =)

Thats really sad:(
But good job I love it.

Sally! sad, it made me think of the song by Eevanescence "Lost in Paradise" beautiful, just like Amy Lee!