Oh my.. this is the only acceptable answer I have...
AMAZING!!!!!!!!

HOLY COW, this is full of emotion I loved it.
"Kiss me
Before my last breath
And with my last breath
I whisper to you
"For ever and always, I love you""
This line made me smile actually because I always say this to my boyfriend.

"Don't cry and please know that you saved me
As long as you could
Saved me from taking my own life
But now the cancer has spread
My parents are dead"
This is so sad and the emotion is amazingly put.

"You set and watch
As I scream in pain
Wishing there was something you could do
As I slowly die
You break down and cry
Tell me you love me
And kiss me
One Last time"
This part was really sad it really caught me great write. Perfect ending.

You are AMAZING!!!!!