Comments : I see the sadness, the hurt

  • 13 years ago

    by HiddenScars

    This is a really meaningful poem. it gives me some courage to actually get help but its really hard to.
    5/5- keep writing you're good :)

  • 13 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    I see the sadness, the hurt.
    I feel the walls you put up
    around yourself,
    to hide behind.

    Really love this part. I can almost see the person crouching behind the walls that he had built up himself to prevent further hurt and pain. Nice poem!