Treasured memories
by chloe farrant May 18, 2012
|
Lets sip our drinks and raise a toast to the things in life that matter the most. |
Did You Like This Poem?
Latest Comments
-
11 years ago
by Illusion
Beautiful, and that shows how great your baby is gonna be, been raised by a caring mother like u..
-
11 years ago
Thank you for your comment. yes i realised once i had posted it the spelling mistake :). it is about my son he is 7 months old now and fills my life with joy :) hence the poem.
-
11 years ago
by Yrem Crish
Wow. This is a very sweet poem. Maybe the persona here describe her feelings about her baby, I am right? I hope I am..hehe.
My life befor---(before)--- you was incomplete, a plain piece of paper a clean white sheet. I will make the most and treasure our time you are precious to me. you are mine.
I love this part. Love the imagery very meaningful and heart soothing.
I watch you grow with a smile on my face, i have planned many memories there is no time to waste.
When you where put into my arms you slipped into my heart that was the begining to a beautiful start!
The persona expressed the emotion here with full of life because of this love one. I like the you write--When you where put into my arms you slipped into my heart that was the begining to a beautiful start!--the tranquility of word used invigorate the whole piece. I really really love it:)
5/5-C
