I like the whole stuff Angel. The flow and the rhyme are great! Thanks for writing this poem to expressed your feeling inside but don't do anything that you said in the poem. You know, writing can help you a lot to subside your emotions but harming your self is not a wise way to escape from your feeling right now. Hold on, Angel. You're not alone. Nonetheless, your poem is really amazing:)
5/5-C

Yeah, Angel you must don't do it...you are so gentle and beautiful. And Justus is always there to care and comfort you, so behind the challenges of life you must be strong:)

No matter what life throws at you, you shouldn't give in to your weaknesses of cutting/eating disorder. it's always going to be something you will struggle with since it technically is an addiction, just like an alcoholic can't take a sip of alcohol or they will relapse. i hope you will keep writing as a release, it helps. overall, a great poem 5/5