Very dark but I love the imagery, the flow and the punctuation used here...I like the words of choice too...ending part of the poem is very creative...

"I would have to spend
coloring up your darkness...."

My mind drift in the air thinking about it...but I know it is very meaningful. Clever work:)

Andrea.. I love the whole idea behind this: coloring darkness!!!!

It's a brilliant piece... and so moving.

I love the idea, painting over darkness

I love the idea of you coloring your nightmares..
Another perfect poem written by you:)
Wish you the best<3

Oh my hun this poem is amazing. I love the images I love the metaphors. You've done well with this. The sadness runs so deep I can feel everything. I am sorry you're feeling like this hun

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This is amazing, so creative. 5/5