Her spirit ripped and torn
but her legacy intact
I like the way you said it

I like the metaphors, the images, and the deep feelings of this piece. I can hear the sadness in between the lines. It flowed with ease and delieverd the piece so smoothly.

Great job.

-Meme

I love this poem. The way you have written it makes me think of the olden day writes. I love the way you have layed out the poem, I thought it made the poem flow well.

Awesome write

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Wow. I love the style..the you write it and the words of choice are perfect. I like the way you put in perfect placed the punctuation marks..it gives more impressionable style to the whole piece. It is perfectly written. Great job!
5/5
~C

Waw liked it soo fab great piece
5/5:)