Comments : Inescapable Afterlife

  • 13 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Wow. Wow. This is really dark and intruguing. Love it a lot. :)

    • 13 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      Thank you v.much :)
      buti think something is missing.. :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Really good poem 5/5 :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Really great dark amazing poem,,magnificent and excellent wording,,greatly written, imagery and feeling,, you've impacted much 5/5

    • 13 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      :D
      Thaks to you for my inspirations.. :)