Nice piece,. I like the smoothness of the flow and I love the scheme or the message of the poem it was clearly stated and conveyed some lessons about life. The one thing is to capitalize the "I" because it ruining your piece. Nonetheless, I enjoy your poem. Good work:)
-C

I so wish I could nominate all ur poems,, their all so good and amazingly written,,you capture my every breath,,my very soul and all that cones with when I read ur deeply written poems 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this!
It was simple, easy to read and flowed very well!
I really like the descriptive language you have used it allows me to see what you are writing which is a very good talent to have!
Thankyou for sharing such talent!
Keep the pen flowing!
Great work!
5/5 from me

Another Masterpiece!!!
great work

Thank you!