Yaki-

I have admired your poetry for some time now... the talent within your writing blows me away... You have taken a deep message and painted it onto canvas... You touched me with this very descriptive poem... I too have felt the emotions within this piece a long time ago... but back then I never wrote about it... and if I did try to.. the metaphors were so thick no one would know the true message... you have touched me with this piece and I applaud you.... awesome write-

Awesome, excellelent writing
wow

This is an amazing write Yak...your analogies were amazing, not over used, but creative enough for us to understand your pain. ..i will have to pm you the rest of my comment.

<3 you

The kind of poetry that has all the truth, all the raw emotion, and all the vulnerability, no matter how happy, sad, shameful, guilty, beautiful, intriguing.... it always hits me in a different way than poetry with pretty imagery and poetic thoughts.

This was real life, and you can't hide from it, you can't escape it. You can just feel it and live it and decide what you want to do about it. This poem has left me with so many feelings..

Wow!

This is so raw and just honest. I love that about poetry, when it's true and someone needs to write to let things out or say how they feel, the poems then become masterpieces. I simply love what you have done with this poem. It saddens me to read it and of course I can feel the emotions in there completely. Yaki you are an amazing poet! I really do love your pieces.

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I love poems like this with just raw emotion, no covered up metaphors or similes... just real feelings. 5/5