I'm really thinking of ditching my draft and not entering that contest. This is really good, Kitty ^^
I really think the echo of the title at each stanza did your piece a favor, and the rhymes helped with the sort of bouncy, light-hearted atmosphere of this piece. Great job. Five
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Good job, I loved your poem:)

And when the light shone through,
Like a flower covered in dew,

that was my favorite part.

I hope this poem wins the competition

You are very talented, keep writing