Comments : My Fists Feels It Too

  • 11 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    This poem blew me away with the powerful wording so deep and reflective.
    I love the way you have melded rhetorical questions displaying to the reader the thoughts that have flooded your mind over the years and up until this moment still breeze through your inner self. I love the way you have ended this poem with so much strength and power which made me think 'WOW'

    Here comes the tears
    How can one person have so many fears
    Why does it hurt to love someone
    Even when their love is done

    ^^
    So reflective providing readers to think of themselves and their own lives where they have felt the pain love conjures!

    5.5 from me

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    I do like this poem as well. It hurts to lose your love and memories from it.

    'I'm doing all that I can to understand' needs to be rewritten it doesnt make sense. I am not sure what you were trying to say there.

    I do love the passion and how you loved this person and the memories you drew. I love the picture you painted with your imagery. It is perfect. 5/5