I can feel the sadness in this poem..very emotional..I like the flows and the rhyming words go smoothly in every lines. Well-penned.
5/5
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My incomplete story, incompleted tie
remains her only memory , the unspoken goodbye
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I really enjoy reading this... Good work...

The ending was the best part. good piece. 5/5

Is it possible to say more, yes but I know you understand that perhaps I've said it all :) 5/5

Very beautifuly written, I could see it all just like a movie,, feeling intertwined as I read like it's me and that's what I'm feeling,,again amazing write

Hey bro,
What a marvel !
A wonderful description here,in an amazingly moulded words and tuned rhythme...!
It was a kinda desperation reaching the end of the poetry,nd wow ! "THe Unspoken Goodbye"-Amazing theme!
I really liked the way u described:
"Tangled hair, waiting for her ferry,
Dressed up in purple and yellow,
Again she looked, peering through her glasses!"
Ur writings are Unique,nd that forces me to add u in my favourite list !
Keep Writin,good job !
Appreciated !!

Very nicely written, can clearly visualize situation of how well you described it and can feel your emotions behind the text. Good job!

From the tittle you may guess the insights but it's more when you read it whole. love it nice! the choice of tittle was way too great!

I luved it! amazing job :)