Comments : Finally

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I feel like one could read this poem and think its directed toward God or specific individual. Either way its beautiful. A thank you to someone who has obviously accepted you for who you are.

    Lovely dedication :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I agree with everything Chelsey said... wonderful poem. 5/5 :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    It feels that it is dedicated to a special person. Great poem Andrea:)

  • 11 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Wow maple,,,still assimilating ua words..it is amazing

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    'I'm growing weary these days,
    my eyelids are the map of a
    twisted road, that has led me
    to you-'

    Lovely imagery. I couldn't stop myself from quoting it. It's beautiful. The 'weary-eyelids-road' connect with each other harmoniously. The first picture that this painted in my mind is of two travelers (perhaps couples) one is driving, the other is sleepy, and the twisting roads wear her out.
    But beneath that literal image lies a metaphoric one that it differs from each person.

    'fantasy's, just a broken souls illusion...'

    fantasy's is possessive, so: fantasies. souls---soul's. Just a minor error I thought I'd point out.

    'You refuse to allow me to forget
    that i'm truly loved and respected,'

    <3
    No words can describe this. Keep writing!
    -X