Comments : Bad memories.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The Past, is hunter of Present. Reconciliation, frees the prey.

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love the assonance in the beginning, I just wish you've kept that til the end, but the subtle rhymes also worked.
    memory's and tree's are possessive nouns or short for memory is.. and tree is..
    so: memories and trees :)
    Other than that, this is a great read.
    The imagery is just raw and sad and vivid. Again, I love your use of punctuation.
    "Ensnared, jagged branches cutting every
    inch they find."---i love the use of 'ensnared' here. It gave this piece a haunting atmosphere.
    I love this. Keep writing!
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very sad. I feel the emotion of the persona here...great piece.
    5/5
    ~C