Very touching. :( so sorry for your loss. great poem, though... keep writing, it helps to get those feelings out. 5/5

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Sami, this is a very emotional piece you have here. I imagine that this is probably a little tribute to your Grandma? It shows how much you love her :) and how big of an impact she made on your life.

I like the structure-couplets :)

I am sorry for your loss and like Hannah said it is good to keep writing to get those feelings out. Awesome job.

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