WAW WAW WAW AWESOME

Thanks

WAW WAW WAW AWESOME
AND IM NOT FINE TOO ILOVE IT CARRY ON

Really beautiful - If I drop a tear on your guitar

it will only play sads songs

so don't ask me if I am alright

you know I am not

don't try to fix me

I swear it's too late ...

Loved every second x

Okay, I promised you my comment. Sorry it's a bit delayed :)
As song lyrics, this is great. To a certain beat or tune, it would work really well. Just a little polishing would make this better:

'If I take all my sorrow and trow it in the
ocean'
typo: throw

'I am such a violon without strings
yeah that kind of violon'
typo on violin. 'Such' is an adjective. Replace it with 'like' or eradicate it completely, either way it'd flow much better.

'I am such one in a million'
Again, 'such' is unnecessary here, so it'd be best to take it off.

'I feel surounded by all my fears
and I realy wanna see all of my dears'
'...all of my dears' seem off. How about revising this and using tears instead? That way, it'd be more coherent and the rhyme would still be there.

Overall, I really like it. The title was well-chosen, and it fits. Well done :)
-X

Very creative piece :0), but it must of taken some time to write this poem to make the entire flow, Good Job!

Thanks ...:)