Comments : Amor numquam morietur

  • 11 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Awwwh such a sweet little poem. <3

    "My Love for you will never die,
    Not even when I do.
    For when I go up to the sky
    my soul will protect you."

    I loved this stanza. I truly did. Imagined standing outside and the soul protecting the person be the feel of the wind. <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This really got to me.... I loved the elegant flow...the wording was elegant and the rhyme scheme was wonderful!! very nice!!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Love it's a beauty, the best feeling give to man kind but also the creator of many other feelings for we love and from that love other feelings are born.

    I like this piece, I like pieces that make me think and this one was sweet. Despised being ill, it shows that there is love and that that love will not die.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    I love this poem, and its simplicity:)
    Very well written, great job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very sweet poem,
    love can gives that push to live more intensively


  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Hm, I was just stalking your profile today haha and came across this piece. I'm always quite skeptical in reading love poems but this one was really well-written and I'm glad I did not skip this. The dedication added a spark to this poem; it added emotion and relatability. Again, the rhymes flowed really well. I love the diction you've used, really consistent all throughout, and it fit the Latin phrase you used.
    I had a friend who died of cancer and whenever I read any poem about that, it really leaves me depressed. However, love was predominant in the atmosphere of this piece, so it has this hopeful tone to it, which I liked.
    Sorry to hear about you grandfather. Hope all the best for him..
    Keep writing :)