Comments : Madurai

  • 11 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I really love this. The improper noun 'god' and repetition of 'god' cleverly captures his omnipresence. He is in beautiful, poetic elements, and he is in the dirt we tread on, and in the food we eat. We walk from the temple not away from god, but "through god and on god and to god."

    You do a wonderful job showing, without telling.

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    This took my breath away. I just love the repetition of God intended to show that He is everywhere and anything reflects his presence. Awesome.

  • 11 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Inside, the Temple is cool.

    I see a firestorm, a question of "am I, on
    the right path",

    and the nourishment of God,
    "pardon the Perfect Noun",

    ladeled to children eager for
    soup and Bread.

    What better time to teach children
    than at supper time.

    Peace and Blessings

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I love this! Such a great way to show that God is everywhere! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Now I am hungry

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very nice i am also felt this little bit few months ago..