Comments : Discover

  • 11 years ago

    by Scarlet Letter

    Wow that was great

  • 11 years ago

    by Cardwell

    Emma

    This poem is magnificent! It is absolutely beautiful! I can see how sad you are, and how unsure you are with life. All through the poem, I just wanted to give you a hug and tell you that everything would be okay :)

    My favorite part was the part about the piano. I play piano as well, and yes, it takes my problems for a short while. I Love what you said about being addicted to music, because it is SO true! especially for a pianist. The piano is my soul :)

    You are wonderful! Don't stop, Emma!

    -Cardwell

    • 11 years ago

      by Emma from the Netherlands

      Thank you so much for saying all this. These comments make me smile... Cool that you're a piano player too! I'm not that good, I focus myself on poetry more, but I do love to play.
      And that's also one of my goals, that people can see things through my poems or that they can relate to them. So thanks a lot for saying all this. I'm so glad I didn't write my poems in Dutch! :) I don't like my own language and this way a lot of people can understand them:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexandra Jozelia

    Here I am ( again ) u_u I told you, you got a fan (:

    "Everyone gets sunshine and rain
    Happy moments, love and pain
    Of course I know I'm not the only one
    But I'm still looking for the sun"

    I love that line, life can be so unpredictable and we never know what will happen next.
    I'm really sorry that you have to pass through all this, I really hope you find the sun and that it brights all your life.
    Also, I think you should follow your dreams, do what you want to do or at least give them a little chance, you know ? Your dreams have a part of you and that's what you want, without them you are incomplete, but that's just my opinion... I play piano too (:
    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Emma from the Netherlands

      That's so true! I always think: no I have, yes I can get.
      So when I at least try, I can never say: what if...
      Then I at least know I did everything about it, so it's not my lack of motivation :)
      Thanks for being my fan, I'd love to have more.