Comments : Bedroom Corner

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Oki first of all I like this poem alot and can rekate too
    I think the persona here is sick of life and thinking of a way to suicide or maybe it is a loner who dont want to be with anybody
    Nice poem overall 5/5 keep writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    Beautiful and dark. I like the flow and use of words 5/5