I feel like a huge burden in my heart after reading this.

Speechless hon @_@

Oh Nana. You wrote everything i was thinking...but in a much more poetic way.

This is awesome yet so sad and heartbreaking.
I love the repetition, drawing on the emotions.

Xx

Loved it...
Double post...on a new phone...confusing

Nana, I love this write a lot.. the 'blue snow'..and 'the white dragon' ... amazing

Amazing poem, all the imagery is overwhelming.

5/5

Nana this is amazing. I love what you have written. Boy could I feel the sadness!

When you're referring to blue snow I believe you are trying to talk about being sad, blue being the word for sadness / depressed. I love this. You have filled this poem with amazing imagery.

There are times in this poem when you talk about more happier colours but the sad part is that you don't feel like you are surrounded by them. That when he left you, the sadness came and has not left. I do wonder though what the white dragons represent. I could not put my finger on it but I do love that you have put it in the poem, I love the image of white dragons.

Awesome poem Nana, loved it

x