Interesting poem. I like how you used two different warriors here with two seemingly different personalities.

The first warrior seems to be a man who doesn't like to kill, or is at least tired of war. You can tell that he doesn't want to do it anymore for whatever the reason.

The second warrior is a man almost completely different from the first one. He has honor and is loyal to whomever he fights for. He is also apparently a deadly warrior. You didn't mention in your poem that this warrior is crying, so I assume that he does not have a problem fighting his enemies. However, at the same time, he does not seem to be as ruthless as you described him to be. He seems to have some tenderness inside him.

Very interesting poem. You told the reader about two different readers in the same situation.

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