God laid them rest in thier bed
with your shoulder in thier head,
and please ease thier pain
as the morge fix my body to coffin.

I enjoyed this verse of the poem and felt that I could relate to it strongly. I felt this was the part in which the whole poem was structured almost the centre point if you will.

I was enjoying the poem and enjoyed the meaning behind it; I too sometimes struggle with this.

Very well done and nicely written.