Comments : Wicked Witch

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Wow, Thomas. I can feel the resentment you have for this person. Kind of makes me a little bit scared for them :)

    Like I said, I can feel the resentment. It is coming off you in waves, or at least it was when you were writing this poem. It seemed like you were hurt repeatedly and finally just ended the relationship. If that was the case, then good for you :)

    I have to say the part that hit me the most would be the last stanza:

    "To end this
    I just want to say
    Just like our pictures
    You will burn at the stake"

    Kind of gave me chills when I read that last line. Hopefully, this will not be like the Salem Witch Trials.

    Excellent job at expressing your anger
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I agree the last stanza gave me chills. Nice tone.
    It added something special to the poem. Well done