Comments : Awakened Jasmines

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    OMG! I love this truely i do, such subtle lines and softness in the tone makes you just melt as you read it.

    Meme one of my favourite pieces of yours xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Forgive me if my silence
    was the only language I
    could speak to you with;
    all my words are stolen
    away from me whenever
    I'm there in your presence..

    Luvd it..bt i think thr shud be one more stanza..beautiful..

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh this is so beautiful, and romantic.

    So very poetic I love it. So gorgeous!

    It blew me away, especially the silence being the only language you could speak.

    Brilliant

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Breathtaking! a very beautiful piece! my favorite part is talking about how silence is the only language you could speak... <3