Very nice piece
5/5

I enjoyed reading, especially the part
of letting go of anger. Anger often blinds
us from the truth. Once the anger is gone
we can see and feel more clearly

A nice piece; I agree with Dagmar, letting go of all the anger is the best choice because if you don't, it will eat you alive the rest of your life and it will make you so bitter. Let go and move on... no since in holding grudges. Great job! :) 5/5

This will be reality.
The future will hold this in store.
Cause in my dream
I did it once before.
^^^
I really liked how you ended this poem:)
Good job Thomas I enjoyed reading it:)

Thomas I love the flow and rhythmic pattern of this love poem.

When the heart is in love it can wait on the one it holds true... this poem was elegant.. I adore small pieces that can make me want to read on for hours... very pretty poem by you~