Comments : Lonely Feelings

  • 11 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    First off Im happy to read something new by you:)

    Would passed like nonstop train in front of me
    There is no existence of those footprints anymore
    On the sand of my love places vanishing everything
    ^^
    this is my fav part:)

    This is really sad, we can sense the sadness through out the poem, good job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Well written, describing this lonely feeling