Comments : Fears Of Night

  • 13 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Really touching, the fear of being alone torture us:)
    Great poem:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Awwww Hassan, that speaks pure sadness my friend. I loved how you linked the rain with your teardrops, very deep images.

    Keep it up :)

    • 13 years ago

      by Boy

      Indeed very deep images.. you reached very right. thats what i wrote. thanks anyway

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Wow! Great write hassan!

    I like this piece alot but.......

    I listen the voices of every single drop asking me..

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

    This line is just pure poetry, like magic!

    Fantastic write well done !

    • 13 years ago

      by Boy

      Thanks alot ben. is it ur name. im sorry if i called it wrong. :) thanks anyway

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Your welcome and yes its ben :-)