Interesting poem you have here, Chloe. However, there are a few typos.

Typos: The title I believe is "Cyanide Suicide." Second line "Noboy" is supposed to be "nobody" I believe. Third line "thoguht" is "thought" Thirteenth line "ties" I think is supposed to be "tie." Seventeenth line "nody" is supposed to be "nobody" and in the same line "burned" is "burn." These are a few typos that I found, however if you don't want to fix them it is your choice. I also thought that it would be best to capitalize all of your "I's" as well.

This has a sad message in it. I have never heard of cyanide killing someone, but I am not a fan of chemistry either so I wouldn't really know.

It also has a good flow to it as well, however with a sad message.

Good job. Try to fix the errors and it will be even better :)
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