Whoops!! Srry...didnt get to finish!!
any way, their ALL good!!
My fav.s were this one, Blind, Misery, Lonely Girl, suicide from a bridge, without wings, and I'm all alone....Like I said, They were ALL good, but these were my fav.s!!
Thanx for reading mine to!!!
Diddo!!
*~*Leanne*~*

hey nice poems i like the way u used the burning flame!! created an image lol and feeling.
o ya n thanks for reading mi poem too:)

Very nice poem, and a really creative name you got there. Besides the spelling error ("tear" instead of "tare"), the poem was excellent.
Aken Sol

Hey I liked this poem, and I especially liked the repeated metaphor of the flame. There are a few errors you should fix of you have the time though. As Aken Sol said above, tear is spelled incorrectly. On lines 7 and 12, it should be "through", not "though". On line 8 I think you meant to say burn, because burning just doesn't seem like the right tense to me, try reading it out loud. I thought the rhyming was well done; it was casual and it flowed well. Good work!

A couple spelling errors, but a very good poem. The repeated flame metaphor was powerful. Check out mine if you have teh chance.

very ncie poem....well written you have talent keep on writing