Beautiful written, I can so much relate

Typos: first line "soked" needs to be "soaked." Ninth line, "breathe" needs to be "breath." Twelfth line, "for ever" needs to be "forever." Fourth line "the" needs to be inserted between "to" and "world" to make sense. However, this is your poem and I am just giving my opinion :) trying to help...

This is a really beautiful poem, Shanix. I was wondering though, why you put this in the cyber love section? It does not seem like this was a love formed over the internet...I was just curious as to why you put it here :] I am not trying to offend you in any way.

Anyways, very beautiful.
5/5

Excellent poem

I totaly agreed with P.R abt d spelling mistakes, bt at d same time cant evn ignore d beauty of uor poem..welldone..shanix

Thanx guys u really great..