Typos: First line "brake" needs to be "break." Line nine, "it's" is supposed to be "its" and line eleven (second to last) "Im" needs to be "I'm." However, it is your poem and I am just trying to help by giving my opinion :]

This is a very good poem - I have often felt this way before in my head, and I still do sometimes... :(

Anyways, excellent poem. Beautiful.
5/5

Great poem