by Boy
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Strong personification. and images.. deep thoughts... good one |
by Bobby
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You stare into an empty waste land |
by Purple Rose
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Typos: first stanza, second line, 'Piercis' is supposed to be 'pierces.' Same stanza, third line, 'nife' is supposed to be 'knife.' Fourth stanza, first line 'waste land' is supposed to be 'wasteland.' However, it is totally up to you to change this, I am just trying to help out :] |