Comments : Can't you see that your hurting me?

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very well written piece with a lot of emotion just radiating from it.
    I love the imagery you used: garden of joy, garden roses, ...

    One remark though, in the title there is a typo (your should you're)

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Slowly Dying

    I Love it!