The concept of this is realy great, it does ring true how humanity is being lost to money. Quite sad actually.

Just one thing, 'richers' should perhaps be 'the rich', I dont believe richers is a world. Otherwise 'rich people', 'millionaires' or the likes of could also work...

Overall, a really great poem with a great message too.

A very thought provoking poem, reflecting indeed mans never ending lust for greed and money.
No matter what party comes into power, what promises are made, it all too soon seems to be forgotten..
A great poem Mohan!

Interesting poem, good job.

In order to quote the parts that hit the most here, I would have to repost it from start to finish. It seemed as though I was reading my own mind, or rather, you were. Great write.