Comments : Battlefield

  • 12 years ago

    by Jon

    This is really good megan i told you you're a good poet

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: in the title, 'field' needs to be 'field' and also, the two words need to become one - 'Battlefield.' Fifth line, 'up hill' needs to be 'uphill.' Also, I would capitalize your 'i' in the last line. All of this is up to you, and I am just trying to help :)

    This is a very short, touching poem. I am sorry for all that you have experienced with this 'up hill battle.' I hope that all is well now :(

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by megan furman

    Thanks for the help i actually didnt even see those mistakes