Comments : A Long Wait

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    To me this sounds more like an inspirational
    piece. Happiness comes within.
    Hope and Faith are very essential to make
    it through life. God is never early nor late
    but always on time. The strenght comes from him
    enjoyed reading
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "It's been a long wait with much more
    expectations,"

    Sometimes, life just seems like a long, never-ending wait; expectations aren't fulfilled and they're just piling up..

    "Don'tdestroy me this time for I won't be
    able to stand again..."

    The previous lines, I have to agree, are very inspiring. But the ending is just hopeless and sad. I don't know if that was your intention or not, but I think this would be better categorized under 'sad poems'. However.. this may also be a life poem since, as stated earlier, life seems to be only a long wait. I don't know. But I find it a bit confounding right now.
    Maybe it's just me and I don't feel particularly well right now aha.
    Still, this was very well-written, Pratikshya. Keep writing!

    • 11 years ago

      by LittleMermaid

      Thank u so much for the suggestion on my poem Xanthe...i really appreciate your suggestion..
      I mostly write when i'm overwhelmed with emotions..be it my own situation or someone else..as u mostly say that my poems are full of emotions,u of course have analysed them all correctly!!n its same with this one too.....about the categorization of the poem,i'm myself confused...
      I'll be very if u analyse my other poems as well.
      Afterall,u comment so brilliantly.
      ^_^

    • 11 years ago

      by LittleMermaid

      Thank u so much for the suggestion on my poem Xanthe...i really appreciate your suggestion..
      I mostly write when i'm overwhelmed with emotions..be it my own situation or someone else..as u mostly say that my poems are full of emotions,u of course have analysed them all correctly!!n its same with this one too.....about the categorization of the poem,i'm myself confused...
      I'll be very if u analyse my other poems as well.
      Afterall,u comment so brilliantly.
      ^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I like this poem because im also related to this

  • 11 years ago

    by Amy

    Beautiful poem, my friend.