Comments : The unheard soldier

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Cleverly written, some good use of imagery.

    I like this stanza the best

    Welcome son, what have you earned
    To claim a place in this heavenly abode?
    Or should your place be in the dungeon below
    'cause that's where the atheists stay.

    Is this about a soldier who died in duty?

    Who is now having to justify killing others in the name of war.

    thanks for the read

    Darren

  • 11 years ago

    by Haridas

    HI sir, I don't have words to thank you. You have refilled my pen to the brim.