Comments : Game Of Lust

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Thomas, I see a complete different
    side of you, I give you prompts
    awesome writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I liked this poem alot. I think its more full on than alot of love poems on here and I liked how you didn't hold back.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by flaredhyz

    Aww.. This poem makes me blushing >_< u hit me with every word u wrote. You definitely have some real talent!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Well, I wasn't expecting this at all! I kind of feel like this should be in the explicit category, under erotic? Lust is different than love. Anyway, it's well written and different from what I've read from you... Great job! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Omar

    Wow thomas, you were taking a risk. But it worked out for. Nice good