Wow! very nice..

Wow..a creation of rage..so full of emotion..nice

I likethe repition of leave at the start of every block
as if you want all the pain hate fear and sadness to just go away.... but at the same time,, saying how you yourself have already sort of "left" as you cleared up in the last 2 lines. i love it. any hey,, hun... everything gets better. if you give it the chance.. and if you let it.

Once agn, u structured dis poem realy wel..
Plus, d stanzas r so gud..flow is smooth..