This is a very beautiful poem, Michaela. I like how you dedicated this to your friends :) It makes it all the more sweeter...

However, there is one thing that I would do with this poem. I wouldn't have the dedication as part of the actual poem. I would simply have it at the bottom, where it is separated. I'm not trying to be mean or rude, or anything like that. I just thought that it would be better if it wasn't part of the actual poem - it kind of killed the flow for me. However, that is just my suggestion.

Anyway, I thought it was an excellent, short poem. Keep on writing :)
5/5