Sad and known feeling, but you really made it sound beautiful there so good job ^^.

Was just thinking if it wouldn`t sound better if inplace of "close my eyes, you would use either "I close my eyes,
hide the tears." to hide the tears."
or "closing my eyes, Just my opinion of course.
hiding the tears."

Don't give up Allie, we love you and we are going to miss you if you go.

Whoa, i love the every bit of it. Great job :)